[雅思写作]雅思小作文解析及范文:男女就业率

Task：Information of employment rates across 6 countries in 1995 and 2005.

雅思小作文解析及范文:男女就业率

　　思路解析：

　　1. 分段原则为：按照数据的共性和趋势分段，eg. 男性均多于女性为一段;从1995到2005都增长为一段。

　　2. 注意一类数据的描述(MAX，MIN，AVG)。

　　3. 举例的时候注意描述改变量，eg. 美国女性的就业比例增长了16%。

　　参考范文：

　　The bar chart shows changes in employment rates in six countries between 1995 and 2005, for men and women. Overall, more people were employed as the time went by, and the proportions of male employment were universally higher.，

　　In conclusion, all the countries in the graph showed men had relatively higher employment rate throughout the period, and more and more people appear to be entering the labor market.

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